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I hate you today
I will hate you tomorrow
I use to love you
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Vision_of_insanity
Published
13th Feb 2024
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smackdownraven
13th Feb 2024 7:38pm
hello dearest Visions it always makes me sad when love turns to hate this is powerful...
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Vision_of_insanity
13th Feb 2024 8:29pm
Thank you smackdownraven. You always delight me with your comments.
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Thor_Azine
13th Feb 2024 9:02pm
Deep within the throes
An enemy clarified
One is the savage
Super powerful senryu.
With a sprinkle of pain, nicely done.
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Vision_of_insanity
13th Feb 2024 9:08pm
Thank you thor_azine
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deadwolf
13th Feb 2024 9:28pm
Greetings man; never been a fan of Haiku,,. but have enjoyed readin your style of it... It gave me pause to think of maybe tryin some, though I don't understand exactly how it goes... Take good care man, and Up the Irons... \m/
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Vision_of_insanity
13th Feb 2024 9:32pm
Thanks for the comment. Haiku's are fun to work with. 5,7,5 for the syllables and that's it.
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- Edited 8th Jan 2025 8:45am
14th Feb 2024 1:08am
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Vision_of_insanity
14th Feb 2024 10:48am
Not really sure. I don't follow any rules.
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