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waiting (under harbor lights)
i'm on
the pier
under
harbor lights,
waiting
for her ship
to come in.
the pier
under
harbor lights,
waiting
for her ship
to come in.
Published 11th Feb 2024
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just something short
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11th Feb 2024 9:41am
Dear J,
Might be something short but very sweet. I like the idea of someone who cares will be waiting. Lovely write.
H🌷
Might be something short but very sweet. I like the idea of someone who cares will be waiting. Lovely write.
H🌷
11th Feb 2024 9:55am
Anonymous
13th Feb 2024 3:42pm
Anxiously awaiting arrival captured superbly in so few lines
13th Feb 2024 11:35pm
