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No Hope
look at the hobo
he looks like me
can he dwell in shadows
if I was me, I'd flee
never once have I thought
seeing me would upset
water is thicker then my blood
self-doubt and regret
prison in this box of artificial delight
can you feel what I can't feel
fake smiles and fake looks
someone reach out for me heal
he looks like me
can he dwell in shadows
if I was me, I'd flee
never once have I thought
seeing me would upset
water is thicker then my blood
self-doubt and regret
prison in this box of artificial delight
can you feel what I can't feel
fake smiles and fake looks
someone reach out for me heal
Published 7th Feb 2024
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7th Feb 2024 12:33pm
7th Feb 2024 12:48pm
Thank you for reading & commenting. I just realized yesterday that I thought I was replying back to everyone that commented on my poems. Where as I was clicking the next box below and leaving a comment to myself! Crazy right? So every poem that you have commented on and you never saw a reply back from me, just know that I appreciated everything you wrote.
7th Feb 2024 12:54pm
I always get your comments back. I've done that too in a public forum on here, lol
Make sure you hit reply to the person's comment but as far as I can tell you've been fine
Make sure you hit reply to the person's comment but as far as I can tell you've been fine
7th Feb 2024 6:30pm
You have a pretty cool style to your poetry. Prison, never mind, I could go on and on. Great writing!
7th Feb 2024 7:47pm
