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Eros

Love so beutiful
Tender and merciful
Deeper than the ocean
A fountain of compassion

If I could reach out
Hold you affectionately
To feel you in and out
By embracing you passionately

Oh!love
Emotions runs high
When you lie down low
Making you its a pleasure

Your dart pierced hearts
With intimate torture
Infected with madness of the Gods
Having you its a painful treasure

The naked truth in your eyes
Lure nations into your fiery hands
Up and down molding future generations
And becoming the nucleus of their cultures

Written by Erotika69

Published 30th Apr 2012

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Athens

JAZZMANOR

- Edited 3rd May 2012 8:15am

2nd May 2012 7:00pm

Not sure if that was your intent, but when I read this Apollo and Aphrodite come to mind! I also found it interesting that you mentioned future generations, cultures, and nations while avoiding Storge, Philia, or Agape love. That leads one to the idea that Eros perhaps is the most dominant---a statement by the way that can easily be backed up. (The cause of the Trojan War, for example)

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Erotika69

3rd May 2012 7:31am

You are right the Trojan war,Paris and Helen,though Troy was destroyed but it's believed that the remains builded Italy.It was my intent to avoid other forms of love and their philosophical complexities and face Eros as the source and cause.thanks Jazzmanor for your insightful comment.