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Troll or Faerie
I cried a river of tears
You built a bridge
I tried to walk across
But I couldn’t guess the answer
To the riddle
Published 1st Feb 2024
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1st Feb 2024 3:12pm
3rd Feb 2024 5:28am
Dear M,
While this poem is brief I really liked the mini story within. I found a relationship in not being able to answer many a riddle and denied entry after trying to cross that bridge. Super write. H🌷
While this poem is brief I really liked the mini story within. I found a relationship in not being able to answer many a riddle and denied entry after trying to cross that bridge. Super write. H🌷
3rd Feb 2024 4:40pm
3rd Feb 2024 9:49am
There's nothing better than the punch of great brevity, which you deal us in spades with this piece.
The title leads to a potential understanding of questioning motives and the pain therein. I think that it's sentiments that are extremely relatable, far and wide.
Here's to the healing catharsis of writing.
Wonderfully poeted.
🌹B
The title leads to a potential understanding of questioning motives and the pain therein. I think that it's sentiments that are extremely relatable, far and wide.
Here's to the healing catharsis of writing.
Wonderfully poeted.
🌹B
3rd Feb 2024 4:40pm
