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A Not So Pleasant Experience
When a carnival comes to town
Cotton candy, makeup for the clowns
Don’t eat before a ride
Puking, people should hide
Always drink plenty of water.
Cotton candy, makeup for the clowns
Don’t eat before a ride
Puking, people should hide
Always drink plenty of water.
Published 31st Jan 2024
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31st Jan 2024 9:03pm
Nothing like getting puked on, lol.
I've puked in some interesting places but not at the carnival. Your writing is full of surprises. Very enjoyable read.
I've puked in some interesting places but not at the carnival. Your writing is full of surprises. Very enjoyable read.
31st Jan 2024 9:06pm
I have gotten puked on in the carnival when I was really young. My brother actually spewed all over me.Terrible experience.
Thank you Debbie. Appreciate the feedback.
Thank you Debbie. Appreciate the feedback.
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