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ON THE BONNET
Consummating a long drive
to place the libido can thrive,
amidst far-from-it-all nature
appealing to sex adventure.
Bouncing bonking on the bonnet
as the couple 'get it on' it
in the moonlight, chassis shaking
in run up to the earth-quaking,
Rings of forest trees bear witness
to sexually gymnastic fitness.
The car's nose is a trampoline
to the al fresco romping scene.
to place the libido can thrive,
amidst far-from-it-all nature
appealing to sex adventure.
Bouncing bonking on the bonnet
as the couple 'get it on' it
in the moonlight, chassis shaking
in run up to the earth-quaking,
Rings of forest trees bear witness
to sexually gymnastic fitness.
The car's nose is a trampoline
to the al fresco romping scene.
Published 29th Jan 2024
Author's Note
Inspired by Dimpy Moon's "Pussy wanna drip silently", which is set in such a session. (What Dimpy calls "hood" is the "bonnet" of a car in British English.)
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29th Jan 2024 7:01am
29th Jan 2024 3:58pm
Solomon, I dread to wonder what the repair bill might be on said car but it all sounds (upon reading) like it was extremely worth it! I almost misread the beginning of your poem, in that you were 'contemplating' lol but then realised, 'E's not contemplating!' lol. Easily pictured the remote scene too with the tress bearing (sorry) witness to your erm... bearing. Nicely written, sir. 😊
29th Jan 2024 5:42pm
Ha ha. It was imaginative (blame Dimpy for firing that imagination), not something I've done on anyone's car bonnet.
31st Jan 2024 3:28am
Even if the bonnet of the car gets broken or the tires of the car get stuck in the ground... I will extinguish the fire of my body on the bonnet of the car itself... N it's one of my fantasy✨🤤💭....
31st Jan 2024 6:24pm
2nd Feb 2024 1:31pm
