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Thunderstruck
Tied, to the middle of a railway track
Hell, there was no, no turning back
Under the guns, sound of the drums
No help, no help from you
Down on my knees
Even askin please
Riding into town
Saw all the lights go down
Texas, yeah, Texas, and we had some fun
Read all the rules
Undid some fools
Cloud 99 had a good time
Kids been................ Thunderstruck !!!!!!
Hell, there was no, no turning back
Under the guns, sound of the drums
No help, no help from you
Down on my knees
Even askin please
Riding into town
Saw all the lights go down
Texas, yeah, Texas, and we had some fun
Read all the rules
Undid some fools
Cloud 99 had a good time
Kids been................ Thunderstruck !!!!!!
Published 25th Jan 2024
Author's Note
for the comp with more than a massive nod to AC/DC well how could you not. Inspiration from Brian Johnson :)
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Anonymous
3rd Feb 2024 5:55am
NICE!!!
I like the mood you [thunder] struck!!!
I like the mood you [thunder] struck!!!
4th Mar 2024 11:30pm
Ha Ha .......I see what you did there :) thank you for taking time to read and comment. Best Keith
