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Lavender and Rose
in the quietness
of the morning
a soft bud stirs in anticipation
ready to unveil its hidden treasure
as loving fingers
slowly stroke its petals
a delicate dance begins
with each stroke
a secret whispered to the world
as each layer peels back
to reveal her depth
petals unfold
like the pages of a novel
revealing the intricate story
written in hues
of lavender and rose
dewdrops
cling to the edges
and the flower opens
a beautiful work of art
in the fullest bloom
coming alive releasing
its intoxicating perfume
of the morning
a soft bud stirs in anticipation
ready to unveil its hidden treasure
as loving fingers
slowly stroke its petals
a delicate dance begins
with each stroke
a secret whispered to the world
as each layer peels back
to reveal her depth
petals unfold
like the pages of a novel
revealing the intricate story
written in hues
of lavender and rose
dewdrops
cling to the edges
and the flower opens
a beautiful work of art
in the fullest bloom
coming alive releasing
its intoxicating perfume
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Re. Lavender and Rose
21st Jan 2024 00:15am
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21st Jan 2024 00:56am
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21st Jan 2024 1:06am
Re. Lavender and Rose
21st Jan 2024 4:33am
Dear JC,
Now this is how every morning should start. Such eloquence in this description. I enjoyed this wake up call. H🌷
Now this is how every morning should start. Such eloquence in this description. I enjoyed this wake up call. H🌷
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21st Jan 2024 4:01pm
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22nd Jan 2024 1:23am
Re: Re. Lavender and Rose
10th Mar 2024 3:42pm
Thank you so much. Sorry for the late reply, I'm hardly here anymore these days.
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10th Mar 2024 5:17pm
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11th Mar 2024 3:28pm
Thank you, yes that's what matters. I hope you're well, it's lovely to see you
Re: Re. Lavender and Rose
11th Mar 2024 6:57pm
Kind of beat down, run over and kicked when I'm down but it is Monday after all ;')
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10th Apr 2024 00:38am
Re. Lavender and Rose
10th Mar 2024 3:55pm
Hello journeychase
Beautifully written and capture the essence of a beautiful feeling we all should have each & every day. Smooth flow & great delivery. Intrigued to read more of your poetry.
Beautifully written and capture the essence of a beautiful feeling we all should have each & every day. Smooth flow & great delivery. Intrigued to read more of your poetry.
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11th Mar 2024 3:29pm
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