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A whimsical erotic free write:)    PS. I would like your suggestions for a potential title!

Our lips meet,
And suddenly you’ve got my whole body on fire..
My senses reeling.
My heart, racing.
My mind, pacing.
This is obscure,
I have to have you…
 
You pull away from our kiss,  
Exhaling in pleasure into my ears,
Bringing your nose to my neck,
rolling your eyes up as though you’re drunk on the very scent of mine.  
Oh when you open your eyes,
My stomach’s in knots,
Wondering what you are,
How you might have this affect on me..
 
“Fuck..”  
I don’t have time to listen to my fears.  
Your lips meet mine again,
Your tongue dancing in my mouth.
Kissing you makes my blood hot,
I feel it rushing and pounding all over my body,
As you push yourself against me,
Greedily demanding more…
My whole body swells as you devour me down.
I love feeling you’re hands firmly around my face,
taking what you want.
Suddenly,
you move to the buttons of my shirt,
With a single pull,
you rip them clean off
Admiring me.
Your eyes on mine.
Wide and wild.
I realise..I’m gone, long gone.
All yours for this moment and more to arrive,
That is.. if you’ll have me.  
 
            - By Sam ( the lovesickgymrat)
Written by Alovesick_gymrat05 (Samara)
Published
Author's Note
Within a newfound passion or desire, individuals often find themselves stuck in a contemplation, grappling with the unfamiliar sensation of vulnerability and submission. It is a grappling sensation that, at some point, we all might have experienced at a certain stage of life, that mysterious moment where love or yearning for another leaves us not only captivated but also, in a way, rendered powerless. If this scenario hasn't personally unfolded in your life, take a moment to read and envisage it. The alluring, all encompassing point of connection and realisation which has the potential to leave us momentarily incapacitated and lost to that individual..
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