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You-Phoria
just beneath your epidermis i tingle
behind your irises i lurk
below your belly button i mingle
sinking deep into your inkwell
i read your hidden encryption from inside out
words take shape through
sacred inscription...heavy in expansion
i hear where you feel
you feel where i speak...in piercing echoes
my amphitheater come back to life
privatized by a pirate's eyes..seeking booty
spied upon from ethereal channels
legs pried apart in the loving darkness
your pearl drips Gaia's wisdom
promising fabled insight at the back of your valley
where my mountain peaks
collapsing air...muscles....memories
lungs...larynx...hips...pelvis...space..time... et al
your spinal column squirms serpentine
your body's snatched again
breaths captured by thrusting tongue
sucking oxygen from the constant pumping action
of fingers one through four
egging you on til you spill fortunes down
the lifelines of a cupped palm
writhing as my ghost plays host to your desires
astral-fucking you thoroughly beneath
a blanket of verbal vibrations
Published 20th Jan 2024
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20th Jan 2024 5:07am
JESUS HELL, that was hot.
Naaj, this was brilliantly executed. There's such a demand to it. The narrator has balls, and he's laying it out aggressively. I am. I am. You will. Those are power statements.
The sexual buildup was fire. The journey from being under the subject's skin, to having a hand full of girl-juice was elegantly played out, and I very much enjoyed the ride.
NICE!
Naaj, this was brilliantly executed. There's such a demand to it. The narrator has balls, and he's laying it out aggressively. I am. I am. You will. Those are power statements.
The sexual buildup was fire. The journey from being under the subject's skin, to having a hand full of girl-juice was elegantly played out, and I very much enjoyed the ride.
NICE!
20th Jan 2024 1:42pm
I’ve read this a few times - so damn addicting.
I might just torture myself today read you after I get done with the showers I have to take from reading you :)
What the hell, it’s still snowing and I’m stuck inside today anyway. Sounds pretty solid to me.
I might just torture myself today read you after I get done with the showers I have to take from reading you :)
What the hell, it’s still snowing and I’m stuck inside today anyway. Sounds pretty solid to me.
20th Jan 2024 4:16pm
damn it Soul Soldier you really got down on this I'm feeling you deeply...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3yDP9MKVhZc
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3yDP9MKVhZc
29th Jan 2024 1:59am
This is awesome.
Clever images built by intelligent, poetic thoughts.
Erotic enough to wake the readers, but not overdone to turn them away.
This is good stuff, Naajir.
Clever images built by intelligent, poetic thoughts.
Erotic enough to wake the readers, but not overdone to turn them away.
This is good stuff, Naajir.
