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Transparency
strange
it was like watching two boats float beside each other
listless;
with their transparent sails
the wind blew right though them as they passed by, neither noticing
the ghost that left a wake beside them
it was like watching two boats float beside each other
listless;
with their transparent sails
the wind blew right though them as they passed by, neither noticing
the ghost that left a wake beside them
Published 16th Jan 2024
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16th Jan 2024 5:46am
This is a perfect little poem, wistful, mystical, ghostly. Don't change a thing. Well done
16th Jan 2024 2:02pm
Love the metaphors...you are an exceptional talent...thanks for sharing. Hugs and peace, Oral
