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Lost in your Space
Into your realm, I ventured,
Sweetness and divinity gently entered.
Feeling your essence, a captivating spell,
Entwined in you, where emotions swell.
You were aware from the start,
Witnessed me sink, quicksand's art.
Sweetness and divinity gently entered.
Feeling your essence, a captivating spell,
Entwined in you, where emotions swell.
You were aware from the start,
Witnessed me sink, quicksand's art.
Published 14th Jan 2024
| Edited 15th Jan 2024
Author's Note
"Lost in your Space" is a poetic journey through the complexities of falling in love and navigating the uncharted territories of emotional entanglement.
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14th Jan 2024 9:41am
You are becoming quote comfortable with your shorter musings, and it still read with such intense when appreciating the overall message, you are conveying.
Enjoy your Sunday.
Enjoy your Sunday.
14th Jan 2024 10:22am
15th Jan 2024 1:52am
