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haiku I

like children moths dance  
around electric blue light
the moon forgotten
janiselizabeth
Written by janiselizabeth (Janis Miller)
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Re. haiku I
14th Jan 2024 1:40am
nice haiku janis
wolfatthedoor1966
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Re. haiku I
Anonymous
14th Jan 2024 1:45am
The moon has been the subject of so many poems, I think he'll get by.

A great haiku Janis.
Anonymous
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Re. haiku I
16th Jan 2024 5:51am
I personally find haiku to be a difficult form to be really successful at. This is an interesting take on it. TY.
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(Janis Miller)
16th Jan 2024 1:50pm
You are right! It really is. It’s a very specific form
janiselizabeth

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