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haiku I

like children moths dance
around electric blue light
the moon forgotten

Written by janiselizabeth

(Janis Miller)

Published 14th Jan 2024

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Re. haiku I

14th Jan 2024 1:40am

nice haiku janis

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Re. haiku I

14th Jan 2024 1:45am

The moon has been the subject of so many poems, I think he'll get by.

A great haiku Janis.

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Re. haiku I

16th Jan 2024 5:51am

I personally find haiku to be a difficult form to be really successful at. This is an interesting take on it. TY.

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16th Jan 2024 1:50pm

You are right! It really is. It�s a very specific form

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