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Perspiring Rain
The sky melts
under a boiling sun
dripping beads of perspiring rain.
Pearls of translucent sweat
slip down glistening skin
into lukewarm pools
then evaporates
in a humid, misty haze;
opaque clouds of breath.
under a boiling sun
dripping beads of perspiring rain.
Pearls of translucent sweat
slip down glistening skin
into lukewarm pools
then evaporates
in a humid, misty haze;
opaque clouds of breath.
Published 13th Jan 2024
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13th Jan 2024 2:43am
What a beautiful medley of words.. sensitive, delicate and yet deep.. nice work!
13th Jan 2024 3:25am
13th Jan 2024 2:49am
Excellent use of titillating and arousing images with metaphors.
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13th Jan 2024 2:09pm
An amazing usage of words that allows the mind to take the next step. Bravo! Hugs and peace. ox
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