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A Single Kiss
Cradle my cerebrum.
Fuse our hemispheres.
Wear the crown of my soul's kingdom.
To create droughts of tears.
Disappear the lonely years.
Your touch is,
necessity of nourishment,
for my groaning hungry skin.
Use the bark of my bones,
to build a castle we may dwell within.
Our souls of destiny entwine and collide.
You crash into my heart with every lunar tide
Unbreakable bliss,
from the prescious pierce of a single kiss.
Fuse our hemispheres.
Wear the crown of my soul's kingdom.
To create droughts of tears.
Disappear the lonely years.
Your touch is,
necessity of nourishment,
for my groaning hungry skin.
Use the bark of my bones,
to build a castle we may dwell within.
Our souls of destiny entwine and collide.
You crash into my heart with every lunar tide
Unbreakable bliss,
from the prescious pierce of a single kiss.
Author's Note
Took one of my very early poems and gave it new life.
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Re. A Single Kiss
11th Jan 2024 12:01pm
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11th Jan 2024 12:05pm
That is very true my friend.
The fusing of hemisphere's, lol
Thank you for always stopping bye.
The fusing of hemisphere's, lol
Thank you for always stopping bye.
Re. A Single Kiss
11th Jan 2024 12:26pm
Beautiful and so sensual. A++ Thanks for sharing your gift. Hugs and peace, Oral
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11th Jan 2024 12:40pm
Re. A Single Kiss
11th Jan 2024 3:28pm
I really like the last line. “Unbreakable bliss,
from the prescious pierce of a single kiss”. (Should it be precious?). The idea of a kiss being so moving is something I have been working on putting into words- you nailed it here. 🌹
from the prescious pierce of a single kiss”. (Should it be precious?). The idea of a kiss being so moving is something I have been working on putting into words- you nailed it here. 🌹
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Re: Re. A Single Kiss
11th Jan 2024 3:38pm
Oh that is so nice, thank you very much.
In all actuality it's the passion I hope to find again.
I would love to hear a post from you 😘, lol
In all actuality it's the passion I hope to find again.
I would love to hear a post from you 😘, lol
Re: Re. A Single Kiss
12th Jan 2024 1:22am
Dear D,
I have been writing pretty sporadically. There are a couple of things in progress that I need to finish 😁. Thank you for the motivation.
I have been writing pretty sporadically. There are a couple of things in progress that I need to finish 😁. Thank you for the motivation.
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Re. A Single Kiss
11th Jan 2024 4:32pm
"Use the bark of my bones,
to build a castle we may dwell within."
Ooo.... beautifully dark... how love can get us so deeply devotionally hooked ...
I agree with wolf too heheh!
So many things.
<3
to build a castle we may dwell within."
Ooo.... beautifully dark... how love can get us so deeply devotionally hooked ...
I agree with wolf too heheh!
So many things.
<3
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Re: Re. A Single Kiss
11th Jan 2024 6:53pm
Thank you so very much for supporting my work!
Yeah love....what a ride, lol
Yeah love....what a ride, lol
Re. A Single Kiss
Anonymous
11th Jan 2024 5:58pm
The passion theme is well suited for this one. The elements of desire and romance stand out in this one.
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Re: Re. A Single Kiss
11th Jan 2024 6:55pm
I really appreciate your feedback, you are a wonderful addition to the site.
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11th Jan 2024 6:29pm
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Re: Re. A Single Kiss
11th Jan 2024 7:29pm
You will not be the first or last poet to become intimate with irony...
which is a characteristic that will have you be irresistible to other poets:)
which is a characteristic that will have you be irresistible to other poets:)
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Re. A Single Kiss
12th Jan 2024 1:32am
The bones of a good poem are eternal. And this one clearly had great bones! Amazing
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12th Jan 2024 1:41am
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