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Untitled Love Poem II
Bathe me in moonlight, darling
under the black silk sky.
My dress would look better
hanging on that tree
next to your black silk tie.
I want to be like the Mississippi River.
I want to flow down the streams with you.
I want you to make me shiver.
I want you to tremble too.
I want you to warm me by the fire
that burns inside your chest
and watch the flames flicker higher
--higher than all the rest.
under the black silk sky.
My dress would look better
hanging on that tree
next to your black silk tie.
I want to be like the Mississippi River.
I want to flow down the streams with you.
I want you to make me shiver.
I want you to tremble too.
I want you to warm me by the fire
that burns inside your chest
and watch the flames flicker higher
--higher than all the rest.
Published 11th Jan 2024
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Anonymous
11th Jan 2024 5:54pm
I like the way you suggest the setting and desired outcome. This has romanticism and erotic interplay that floats as easily within the scene as the words on the page.
I like it Janis.
I like it Janis.
12th Jan 2024 6:29pm
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