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Icicle Stick
Cold drip wet tick
Hard ice firm grip
Lick-a-like a popsicle stick
Up and down and down and up
Tongue twists a glossy slip
Fresh as snow the way it blow
Sucking on an icicle stick!
Hard ice firm grip
Lick-a-like a popsicle stick
Up and down and down and up
Tongue twists a glossy slip
Fresh as snow the way it blow
Sucking on an icicle stick!
Published 11th Jan 2024
Author's Note
Just remembered one time my friend broke an icicle stick and ate it... then a fun inspiration !
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11th Jan 2024 1:43am
if i didn't know better i'd say this is a strong metaphor for something quite different and naughty. (wink)
11th Jan 2024 3:09am
11th Jan 2024 3:37am
You work your metaphor like nature's popsicle. Delicious and wicked naughty. Big grin.
John
John
11th Jan 2024 3:40am
11th Jan 2024 4:15am
11th Jan 2024 4:24am
11th Jan 2024 11:55am
Now that's an achievement I didn't think to reach!
But I'm glad it did!
:)
<3
But I'm glad it did!
:)
<3
13th Jan 2024 2:19am
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