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Coin in One
In life's dance, we're a coin cast,
Dual faces entwined, a fate amassed.
At times, you ascend, sometimes it's my flight,
With each fall, a resonant ring, echoing the night.
In descent and ascent, we remain entwined,
Indivisible spirits, a unity refined.
Dual faces entwined, a fate amassed.
At times, you ascend, sometimes it's my flight,
With each fall, a resonant ring, echoing the night.
In descent and ascent, we remain entwined,
Indivisible spirits, a unity refined.
Published 10th Jan 2024
Author's Note
"Coin in One" delves into the intricacies of a profound relationship, metaphorically likened to a coin with dual faces. In the dance of life, two individuals are inseparably entwined, their destinies interwoven into a shared fate. The verses illustrate the cyclical nature of their journey—moments of ascent, flight, and descent marked by resonant echoes that linger through the night.
As the coin falls, a melodious ring reverberates, symbolizing the depth of their connection. Through the highs and lows, the descent and ascent, their spirits remain intertwined, forming an indivisible unity that is not only enduring but also refined.
"Coin in One" seeks to capture the essence of shared experiences, unity, and the unspoken harmony that binds two souls on their journey through life.
As the coin falls, a melodious ring reverberates, symbolizing the depth of their connection. Through the highs and lows, the descent and ascent, their spirits remain intertwined, forming an indivisible unity that is not only enduring but also refined.
"Coin in One" seeks to capture the essence of shared experiences, unity, and the unspoken harmony that binds two souls on their journey through life.
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10th Jan 2024 1:06pm
Based upon your note all i can say is that you succeeded.
a wonderfully written poem.
a wonderfully written poem.
