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Opened Skin
How he makes me open
With his suggestions
His hands hint
Under the covers
As they glide and
Tease my skin
Only he can
Make me blink
And glow
Neon red
In bed
Humming
Like a sign
So he’ll know
It’s okay
To not go away
He can slide
Inside
No need to hurry
I’ll close when
He’s done
But for now
He can browse
Around
He can pick up
And touch
Everything
Take his time
No need to buy
Anything
My Opened Skin
In love
Given freely
Exclusively
With his suggestions
His hands hint
Under the covers
As they glide and
Tease my skin
Only he can
Make me blink
And glow
Neon red
In bed
Humming
Like a sign
So he’ll know
It’s okay
To not go away
He can slide
Inside
No need to hurry
I’ll close when
He’s done
But for now
He can browse
Around
He can pick up
And touch
Everything
Take his time
No need to buy
Anything
My Opened Skin
In love
Given freely
Exclusively
Author's Note
Welp - I'm in love:)
That about sums it up. LOL
That about sums it up. LOL
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Re. Opened Skin
8th Jan 2024 11:04am
You make being in love sound tempting. I might need to try it sometime. Sweet write. 🌼
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Re: Re. Opened Skin
12th Jan 2024 3:47am
Well howdy Joe:)
Love is the best!!
It's rewarding and so worth the risk.
Thanks for the read amigo!!
Love is the best!!
It's rewarding and so worth the risk.
Thanks for the read amigo!!
Re. Opened Skin
8th Jan 2024 11:17am
In love is the greatest blessing 🙌
Congrats on your acquisition, so many don't have it and wish they did ...
I'm one of the lucky ones too so I know...
BIG LIKE
Congrats on your acquisition, so many don't have it and wish they did ...
I'm one of the lucky ones too so I know...
BIG LIKE
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Re: Re. Opened Skin
12th Jan 2024 3:50am
Hi PS
I totally agree. I'm a lovey dovey person.
I wish they did too:)
thanks for the read and stopping by amigo:)
I totally agree. I'm a lovey dovey person.
I wish they did too:)
thanks for the read and stopping by amigo:)
Re. Opened Skin
8th Jan 2024 2:18pm
The 2 of you give someone like me hope. It's a true delight witnessing your love. Biggest of smiles for both of you. I love the dual layers of this piece...the imagery of a flashing bar sign open for only one patron...& the vulnerability of being completely bare to that same person. Beautifully written!
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Re: Re. Opened Skin
12th Jan 2024 3:54am
Hi Willow
You've become someone I really adore and respect. I'm sending you
nothing but best wishes in the love department store:)
I love painting my readers mind. I'm a huge fan of Frida Kahlo
and those crazy eyebrows! I'm a horrible painter with paint - but I'm trying with words.
thanks for stopping by amiga:)
You've become someone I really adore and respect. I'm sending you
nothing but best wishes in the love department store:)
I love painting my readers mind. I'm a huge fan of Frida Kahlo
and those crazy eyebrows! I'm a horrible painter with paint - but I'm trying with words.
thanks for stopping by amiga:)
Re. Opened Skin
Anonymous
8th Jan 2024 2:49pm
There's so much in this poem that speaks of love & full sharing. Amazing!

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Re: Re. Opened Skin
12th Jan 2024 3:55am
Hi C!
With love there has to be full sharing or it's not love.
Thank you so much for the Amazing. Know what! You're amazing:)))
Thanks for the read:)
With love there has to be full sharing or it's not love.
Thank you so much for the Amazing. Know what! You're amazing:)))
Thanks for the read:)
Re. Opened Skin
8th Jan 2024 2:57pm
Re: Re. Opened Skin
12th Jan 2024 3:56am
Hi Cisco:)
Thanks for that. That's why I put the color red amigo.
Muy claiente!! haha
Thanks for the read and all of your support amigo.
It doesn't go unnoticed:)
Thanks for that. That's why I put the color red amigo.
Muy claiente!! haha
Thanks for the read and all of your support amigo.
It doesn't go unnoticed:)
Re. Opened Skin
8th Jan 2024 4:52pm
I feel lucky to be able to read this and feel warmth and comfort knowing I've got that too.
LJ
LJ
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Re: Re. Opened Skin
12th Jan 2024 3:58am
Hi LJ
I'm so happy for you. You deserve all of the warmth and comfort.
Life is hard - it's nice to have that special place:)
Thanks for the read:)
I'm so happy for you. You deserve all of the warmth and comfort.
Life is hard - it's nice to have that special place:)
Thanks for the read:)
Re. Opened Skin
8th Jan 2024 9:54pm
Whoo! Is it hot in here? I liked the ebb and flow, and the little tings of rhyme you have.
I also loved the embedded metaphoric image of a lover as a one-stop-shop. That he can open and close you, and fulfil your needs. Very cool imagery!
I also loved the embedded metaphoric image of a lover as a one-stop-shop. That he can open and close you, and fulfil your needs. Very cool imagery!
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Re: Re. Opened Skin
12th Jan 2024 4:06am
Hi Betty:)
Tings are a must in writing!!! haha
Thank you for your snaps on this amiga.
I was telling Willow Frida Kahlo is a huge influence on my writing.
Imagery is a must for me. I'm a horrible painter so I try my best with
words.
Thank you muncho!!
Tings are a must in writing!!! haha
Thank you for your snaps on this amiga.
I was telling Willow Frida Kahlo is a huge influence on my writing.
Imagery is a must for me. I'm a horrible painter so I try my best with
words.
Thank you muncho!!
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Re: Re. Opened Skin
12th Jan 2024 4:07am
Re. Opened Skin
11th Jan 2024 2:42am
This sums it up, huh. Well honey, I love your word-math!
This write makes me think of our times browsing in stores, and such. Just meandering and being silly. Obviously I sense the sexual tone within it. I mean, yeah. Yet we always have that energy towards everything. Your spontaneity is so rewarding! It's making me younger!
Okay, the write itself; It has a sexual curiosity undertone, that leads the "just looking" reader (me) to actually acquiring the offer. A fulfilled tease, perhaps.
What a totally cool, clever thing to read. I love the scene it portrays. Well described, and well shared. You're rocking it baby.
This write makes me think of our times browsing in stores, and such. Just meandering and being silly. Obviously I sense the sexual tone within it. I mean, yeah. Yet we always have that energy towards everything. Your spontaneity is so rewarding! It's making me younger!
Okay, the write itself; It has a sexual curiosity undertone, that leads the "just looking" reader (me) to actually acquiring the offer. A fulfilled tease, perhaps.
What a totally cool, clever thing to read. I love the scene it portrays. Well described, and well shared. You're rocking it baby.
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Re: Re. Opened Skin
12th Jan 2024 4:10am
Hey Sexy Dimples:)))
I'm so happy to hear that since you're taking me shopping for jeans:)))
hehehe
yes - there is a sexual tone to this cause I'm just s smidge obsessed with you but I promise it's okay. Don't worry. I've got it under control - sort of.
Okay maybe - but not really:) It's the killer key lime dimples!!
Love ya sweet cheeks:)
I'm so happy to hear that since you're taking me shopping for jeans:)))
hehehe
yes - there is a sexual tone to this cause I'm just s smidge obsessed with you but I promise it's okay. Don't worry. I've got it under control - sort of.
Okay maybe - but not really:) It's the killer key lime dimples!!
Love ya sweet cheeks:)
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26th Feb 2024 4:45pm
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18th Apr 2024 2:04am
I had a vision of a flashing red neon sign and thought about how
we open ourselves to people we love.
I can be whatever he needs:)
we open ourselves to people we love.
I can be whatever he needs:)