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First Snowfall
Snow.
An absolutely peaceful fall.
A magic white blanket drapes
the bland, brown haggard world.
Monstrous barren branches,
now possess sugary enhancements.
The speed and swirl.
Stark, the unblemished street,
glimmers the palest pearl.
Is snow just flaked ashes
of ornately discarded dreams?
As the frozen moon, has a say,
haunting the storm with the most
angelic phosphorescent beams.
A peaceful enthrall to those who fall......
An absolutely peaceful fall.
A magic white blanket drapes
the bland, brown haggard world.
Monstrous barren branches,
now possess sugary enhancements.
The speed and swirl.
Stark, the unblemished street,
glimmers the palest pearl.
Is snow just flaked ashes
of ornately discarded dreams?
As the frozen moon, has a say,
haunting the storm with the most
angelic phosphorescent beams.
A peaceful enthrall to those who fall......
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Re. First Snowfall
6th Jan 2024 11:42pm
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6th Jan 2024 11:45pm
Re. First Snowfall
6th Jan 2024 11:42pm
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6th Jan 2024 11:45pm
Thank you so very much.
I may have to write a poem about bitching about shoveling, lol. Getting deep.
I may have to write a poem about bitching about shoveling, lol. Getting deep.
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6th Jan 2024 11:47pm
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6th Jan 2024 11:54pm
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7th Jan 2024 1:24am
Re. First Snowfall
7th Jan 2024 4:19am
You have captured this feeling beautifully for those who allow the wonder of nature into their hearts & indeed those who fall for its charms. :-)
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7th Jan 2024 9:43am
Thank you, that was such a a nice comment.
I'm usually spellbound by nature.
I think I was a fairy who lives in the forest in another life 😊
I'm usually spellbound by nature.
I think I was a fairy who lives in the forest in another life 😊
Re. First Snowfall
7th Jan 2024 8:08am
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7th Jan 2024 9:45am
Hi! I love watching it too. It's very peaceful.
The mounds of snow I have to shovel, not so much, lol.
Thank you for checking out.
The mounds of snow I have to shovel, not so much, lol.
Thank you for checking out.
Re. First Snowfall
7th Jan 2024 10:29am
I always feel that the snows fall inside my being, refreching my burning body, and giving a new breath into my existence
a new rebirth, it seems .
Thanks for sharing your fine pen.
a new rebirth, it seems .
Thanks for sharing your fine pen.
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7th Jan 2024 10:35am
Wow, your comment was beautiful.
Thank you so much for reading & sharing your feelings with me.
Thank you so much for reading & sharing your feelings with me.
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7th Jan 2024 10:44am
It's a great pleasure to share my dear friends the joys of poetry, and Nature
Have good times, here and wherever you go.
Regards.
Have good times, here and wherever you go.
Regards.
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Re. First Snowfall
7th Jan 2024 11:54pm
Is snow just flaked ashes
of ornately discarded dreams?
Damn...I'm stuck with those amazing lines! Aesthetically I love snow...the beauty & glamour of it is incredible. It's the cold the bites my butt! 😊
of ornately discarded dreams?
Damn...I'm stuck with those amazing lines! Aesthetically I love snow...the beauty & glamour of it is incredible. It's the cold the bites my butt! 😊
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8th Jan 2024 5:18am
Thank you so much. Ok that beauty, was heavy boulders of snow to shovel, lol.
I love it aesthetically too. I don't know where I came up with the snowflakes being ashes of dreams, but a pretty cool line came out of it.
Thank you for checking out and your kind words!
I love it aesthetically too. I don't know where I came up with the snowflakes being ashes of dreams, but a pretty cool line came out of it.
Thank you for checking out and your kind words!
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Anonymous
8th Jan 2024 2:26pm
Love the image of a frozen moon and phosphorescent beams. Beautiful winter scene here
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8th Jan 2024 2:54pm
Hi! I became obsessed with something being phosphorescent. Lol Thank you for kindly commenting;!
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8th Jan 2024 7:44pm
Perfectly wonder-dazed beautiful snow poem.
I feel sparkling in your snowy wonderland!
<3
I feel sparkling in your snowy wonderland!
<3
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8th Jan 2024 8:21pm
That is great to hear. The sun was out today, so the sun was shining on the snow. Sparkly.
Thank you for stopping bye.
Thank you for stopping bye.