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Everburning Till Death to Come
Another prey left in my garage
My obsession of observation
Till his final dying breath
In my blood, my lineage
Till I bury its corpse beneath
My one and only motivation
Another Friday, another new discovery
Of human kind, and onto the next
Collecting pieces; cadaver discography
Curiosity, never seem to be deceased
Breaking bones and their minds
Psychological, beautiful depravity
Count your days, until it ends
Just a corpse, for my discography
One more day you may remain
Until tonight your horror begins
Published 6th Jan 2024
| Edited 19th Jan 2024
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6th Jan 2024 7:05pm
6th Jan 2024 8:10pm
I do too~!
Although I may have thought of mind of a killer, I also hoped for an undertone of something kinky too~although morbid,
Imagine a dungeon of serial killer dominatrix!
Although, I don't want to limit the point of view to any gender...
Anyone can have a dungeon in the garage...!!
(for whatever the purpose)
Although I may have thought of mind of a killer, I also hoped for an undertone of something kinky too~although morbid,
Imagine a dungeon of serial killer dominatrix!
Although, I don't want to limit the point of view to any gender...
Anyone can have a dungeon in the garage...!!
(for whatever the purpose)
6th Jan 2024 7:06pm
6th Jan 2024 8:05pm
Yup... I'm glad you thought so heheh,
Minds of serial killers are so dark ...
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Minds of serial killers are so dark ...
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- Edited 8th Jan 2025 8:45am
6th Jan 2024 7:08pm
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6th Jan 2024 8:04pm
Yes!!!
I was thinking about Ted Bundy actually hehe.
You described it so perfectly!
Thanks for the visit.
<3
I was thinking about Ted Bundy actually hehe.
You described it so perfectly!
Thanks for the visit.
<3
6th Jan 2024 8:19pm
6th Jan 2024 8:35pm
7th Jan 2024 2:32pm
Oh! Dark as my mind's Stradivarius whispering innuendoes. Fantastic writing shadows and pen.
8th Jan 2024 7:46pm
9th Jan 2024 2:25am
The Heart of darkness is superbly rendered into poetry that could be the diary of a serial dominatrix indeed. You are as gifted with the dark as the light my friend. It takes a grand imagination to delve into the black magic of an assassin's heart.
John
John
9th Jan 2024 3:19am
I guess just like Ted Bundy I myself have an interest to observe someone... but without the killer instinct.
I have an interest in people's mind... dark and light!
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I have an interest in people's mind... dark and light!
<3
