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Tormentor
He brought to mind
Ted Bundy;
the Green River Killer.
I remember a light,
strong and penetrating—
blinding,
forcing me to close
my eyes.
Imagine a feeling
of helplessness,
apprehension,
fear.
I trembled;
I prayed.
I heard the cling
of metal;
of breathing.
Then, his hands
reached out towards me,
bringing pain.
My worst fears,
my worst nightmares,
come true.
"Looks like you'll need
some root canal.
Schedule him for Tuesday."
Does God hear prayers?
Apparently not.
Ted Bundy;
the Green River Killer.
I remember a light,
strong and penetrating—
blinding,
forcing me to close
my eyes.
Imagine a feeling
of helplessness,
apprehension,
fear.
I trembled;
I prayed.
I heard the cling
of metal;
of breathing.
Then, his hands
reached out towards me,
bringing pain.
My worst fears,
my worst nightmares,
come true.
"Looks like you'll need
some root canal.
Schedule him for Tuesday."
Does God hear prayers?
Apparently not.
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Re. Tormentor
5th Jan 2024 5:48am
Haha!
Love the turn of events!
I need to get my wisdom teeth pulled..not looking forward to it.
<3
Love the turn of events!
I need to get my wisdom teeth pulled..not looking forward to it.
<3
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5th Jan 2024 2:08pm
Re. Tormentor
5th Jan 2024 2:09pm
I literally have a dental visit in a couple of weeks... YIKES... nicely done...
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Re. Tormentor
7th Jan 2024 8:59pm
a very stark comparison. 80 + violent murders perpetrated by two male creatures with their attendant torture & rape.
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7th Jan 2024 9:02pm
Re. Tormentor
7th Jan 2024 10:29pm
Dentist’s strike fear like being in a horror film.
I never understood why I’m always so much more afraid of getting my teeth cleaned or a cavity filled than I am of surgery.
I enjoyed this.
I never understood why I’m always so much more afraid of getting my teeth cleaned or a cavity filled than I am of surgery.
I enjoyed this.
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Re: Re. Tormentor
7th Jan 2024 10:32pm
i'm lucky in that i haven't had a cavity in manymnay years but i still hate going and sitting in that seat. thank you her.
Re. Tormentor
7th Jan 2024 10:49pm
oh wowee I loved this I especially loved that you incorporated on of my favored serial killers as a comparison to your Sadistic dentist 💕
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Re: Re. Tormentor
7th Jan 2024 10:50pm
a favored serial killer? ted? i didn't think people preferred killers before (laughs) thanks for the comment.
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7th Jan 2024 10:51pm
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7th Jan 2024 10:54pm
i read a lot about him. he didn't mind destroying women in the worst way. like hitting a college student over the head with a log. ow
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7th Jan 2024 10:57pm
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7th Jan 2024 10:59pm
Re: Re. Tormentor
the idea of being kept as a prize...the sexual aspects too...let me introduce myself better I have two avtars here I'm also known as Raven...
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/338971-ted-bundy-dreaming/
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/338971-ted-bundy-dreaming/
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Re. Tormentor
8th Jan 2024 8:53pm
I like the way you changed direction in the ending. I was totally interpreting it another way.
Great work!
Great work!
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