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A Mother's Might
A pureness;
I shall protect you
from the pain and trials
of this world.
Not ever doubt you
those round cheeks in smiles
sweetest of my world.
Your cuteness;
Is most definitely unrivaled
no question
affection always entitled.
I hope you'll live a happy life
No pain nor trials to stop your path
In a long journey such as life
Make sure to learn yourself some math!
Success and ever blessed luck
Meet ones to share your love
But never give it away for a few buck
Cherish your heart, save for those who deserve.
I will always love you with all my might,
My sweet, my life, my blood!
Published 4th Jan 2024
Author's Note
A mother's might is always so admirable!!
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4th Jan 2024 11:48am
Beautiful words! I like how your poem flows and how I could feel your passion throughout. A mother's poem is not a theme I come across, sad to say. But would be welcomed if as well penned as this.
5th Jan 2024 4:17am
I really appreciate your visit!!
I agree with you, I haven't read much of motherhood, but I just had a sudden urge about moms and their love for their child.. it's a beautiful thing.
:)
I agree with you, I haven't read much of motherhood, but I just had a sudden urge about moms and their love for their child.. it's a beautiful thing.
:)
4th Jan 2024 8:22pm
This is beautiful written. I can truly feel the love the mother has for their child.
5th Jan 2024 4:18am
Anonymous
5th Jan 2024 2:43pm
you express a universal truth with this poem. a mothers love cannot be denied when it is given and that love comes with a special bond that cannot be broken.
5th Jan 2024 3:20pm
Thank you!
I agree,
it's very moving sometimes how far a parent would go for their child.. you know there's a saying in Korea
"A porcupine would say her child is soft"
I agree,
it's very moving sometimes how far a parent would go for their child.. you know there's a saying in Korea
"A porcupine would say her child is soft"
Anonymous
5th Jan 2024 3:24pm
that's a good saying.
5th Jan 2024 3:34pm
9th Jan 2024 1:07am
This touched my heart with the gentle love of a mother for her child. You truly captured the feeling of motherhood with words that wrapped around me. A mother's love is eternal.
John
John
9th Jan 2024 1:20am
Thank you John.
Mothers can be wonderful beings.
I hope I can be such too someday.
<3
Mothers can be wonderful beings.
I hope I can be such too someday.
<3
I have an intuitive feeling that a child with you as their mother would be very fortunate indeed. The love in your heart glows through your words. There is a light in your poetry that shines as warm as the sun to bring joy to my heart.
John
John
9th Jan 2024 1:32am
You're too sweet!!
Your encouragement brings warmth to me as well.
I hope to bring more in this cold season...!
<3
Your encouragement brings warmth to me as well.
I hope to bring more in this cold season...!
<3
