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Journey alone~
Walking through the forest with moss laden feet I quietly exit this life
unseen, unheard while being swallowed up by the screams inside my internal earth
Rotting corpses leave my senses swaying in the depths of my screams
catering to the sorrows that wander inside me due to mass chaos
Parallel Universes divide that inner peace with fair play soul slice…
Dark vs.Light
Always, in every space of existence the reality of balancing the inner and outer
earth, keeps the echoes of the forbidden just within reach
Outstretched hands with shallow breathing, grasp for the unknown
Can you feel the breathe of release, on your bloody hands too? No one
is unscathed, no one less demented, no one…not one, free
Sit with me for a moment. Let’s watch life pass us by. Let’s “see” the truth
of it all, us, them and I.
The meat suit of this life, folds into the decay on my path…while you…you stop
to take a piss.
Acidic wet dreams eternal...
unseen, unheard while being swallowed up by the screams inside my internal earth
Rotting corpses leave my senses swaying in the depths of my screams
catering to the sorrows that wander inside me due to mass chaos
Parallel Universes divide that inner peace with fair play soul slice…
Dark vs.Light
Always, in every space of existence the reality of balancing the inner and outer
earth, keeps the echoes of the forbidden just within reach
Outstretched hands with shallow breathing, grasp for the unknown
Can you feel the breathe of release, on your bloody hands too? No one
is unscathed, no one less demented, no one…not one, free
Sit with me for a moment. Let’s watch life pass us by. Let’s “see” the truth
of it all, us, them and I.
The meat suit of this life, folds into the decay on my path…while you…you stop
to take a piss.
Acidic wet dreams eternal...
Published 2nd Jan 2024
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3rd Jan 2024 5:31am
Dear T,
This piece made me shiver. It was so austerely lonely as though I was running from something sinister. The ending was a fantastic twist. Darkly humorous in a way. Stanza three is the perfect description of life on any given day. Super write. H🌷
This piece made me shiver. It was so austerely lonely as though I was running from something sinister. The ending was a fantastic twist. Darkly humorous in a way. Stanza three is the perfect description of life on any given day. Super write. H🌷
10th Jan 2024 3:48am
It was starting off to be something then my TV died and I got angry lol. Go figure. Thank you for reading me and always sharing your thoughts. 🩵🩵🩵
9th Jan 2024 2:23am
Even if I take a piss, doesn't mean I am not listening to your fears... for I feel them too.
10th Jan 2024 3:50am
22nd Jan 2024 11:58pm
31st Jan 2024 4:40am
Wowzers Lily, your inks always amaze me, you always write deep within your soul and I’m always lost for words, RL for me my sacred friend. Purple luv & hugs 💜
5th May 2024 2:09pm
13th May 2024 2:23pm
Journey Alone" paints a vivid and haunting picture of inner turmoil and existential reflection. The imagery of walking through a forest with "moss-laden feet" evokes a sense of isolation and detachment from the world, as the speaker quietly exits their life, consumed by internal screams.
The contrast between dark and light, symbolized by "Dark vs. Light" and "Parallel Universes," underscores the ongoing struggle to find balance amidst chaos and uncertainty. The speaker grapples with the duality of existence, where inner peace is constantly threatened by external forces and the echoes of forbidden desires linger just out of reach.
The imagery of "rotting corpses" and "bloody hands" adds to the sense of despair and decay, highlighting the universal experience of suffering and loss. Yet, amidst the darkness, there is a call for connection and understanding as the speaker invites others to "sit with me for a moment" and witness the truth of life together.
The final lines, with the juxtaposition of the speaker's existential contemplation and the mundane act of "taking a piss," offer a stark reminder of the fleeting nature of life and the inevitability of decay. "Journey Alone" is a poignant exploration of the human condition, inviting readers to confront the complexities of existence and find solace in shared experience.
The contrast between dark and light, symbolized by "Dark vs. Light" and "Parallel Universes," underscores the ongoing struggle to find balance amidst chaos and uncertainty. The speaker grapples with the duality of existence, where inner peace is constantly threatened by external forces and the echoes of forbidden desires linger just out of reach.
The imagery of "rotting corpses" and "bloody hands" adds to the sense of despair and decay, highlighting the universal experience of suffering and loss. Yet, amidst the darkness, there is a call for connection and understanding as the speaker invites others to "sit with me for a moment" and witness the truth of life together.
The final lines, with the juxtaposition of the speaker's existential contemplation and the mundane act of "taking a piss," offer a stark reminder of the fleeting nature of life and the inevitability of decay. "Journey Alone" is a poignant exploration of the human condition, inviting readers to confront the complexities of existence and find solace in shared experience.
12th Jul 2024 9:10pm
