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In The Still Opened Bathrobe
Vivian was in
the shower when she heard the
doorbell ring and grabbed the robe.
She opened the door
and saw Keith staring at her
in the still opened bathrobe.
the shower when she heard the
doorbell ring and grabbed the robe.
She opened the door
and saw Keith staring at her
in the still opened bathrobe.
Published 30th Dec 2023
Author's Note
In this sedoka poem, one person opens a door for a friend and yet, forgot to do something after stepping out of the bathroom.
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