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Slipping Back Into The Abyss
Feeling cold inside
icy fingers grip my psyche
I fear slipping in once again
to that dank abyss
which tears at the heart and soul
shuddering because I can still feel it's warmth
heroin once my God
making me blissfully unaware and numb.
icy fingers grip my psyche
I fear slipping in once again
to that dank abyss
which tears at the heart and soul
shuddering because I can still feel it's warmth
heroin once my God
making me blissfully unaware and numb.
Published 28th Apr 2012
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28th Apr 2012 8:49pm
nice ,wish you had wrote just a lil more but all in all great.I felt the words
28th Apr 2012 9:04pm
Anonymous
28th Apr 2012 8:55pm
This is a good short poem
but given more information
would have been a FABULOUS longer poem
What drives the person to use the drug
Once rehabilitated, what drives them back
These are the unanswered questions of your
poem
but given more information
would have been a FABULOUS longer poem
What drives the person to use the drug
Once rehabilitated, what drives them back
These are the unanswered questions of your
poem
28th Apr 2012 9:07pm
ty for stopping in.. I usually don't write such short poems but i'm feeling a bit blank right now..ty for your thoughts on this poem..wishing you peace Crim :)
Anonymous
28th Apr 2012 9:34pm
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28th Apr 2012 9:52pm
ty Christian but it is you that inspire me..your poems are raw, honest and tell at length why not to use..ty again..peace Crim :)
28th Apr 2012 10:24pm
Much depth in this piece, the pull of the dark times can be all consuming, few words that speak volumes here..... A great write.
28th Apr 2012 10:42pm
29th Apr 2012 2:49am
Sometimes when feeling are VERY strong
what is said however short and sweet
makes them that much more powerful...
Loved it!
what is said however short and sweet
makes them that much more powerful...
Loved it!
29th Apr 2012 8:58pm
29th Apr 2012 2:54am
29th Apr 2012 8:59pm
I will..it's been too long and I have too much to lose to use heroin again..ty Gg peace Crim :)
29th Apr 2012 4:30pm
Dear Crimsin .. Sometimes the best poems are those that are short but compressed with feelings and meaning ... It usually takes a real artist to write poems like this ... Love and peace ... Bruce
29th Apr 2012 9:00pm
Anonymous
30th Apr 2012 9:37pm
love it crim! ;)
30th Apr 2012 9:42pm
3rd May 2012 4:35am
I felt like this when I started huffing and drinking again... I have never tried heroin...
3rd May 2012 6:16am
I wish you power and strength on your journey..ty for your comment it's appreciated..wishing you peace Crim :)
6th May 2012 5:19pm
I share the feelings you express, so strange to find a reflection of my inner nothingness
6th May 2012 9:40pm
I'm only sorry you can relate..ty for sharing your feelings..wishing you peace Crim
10th May 2012 5:27pm
11th May 2012 6:55am
Anonymous
5th Jun 2016 8:46pm
Heroin sucks! Not that I've dabbled.
5th Jun 2016 11:35pm
10th Sep 2018 3:59pm
Pulling me in from every angle, it's pointed claws I feel familiar ,.... I know were it goes
10th Sep 2018 6:35pm
