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Insatiable.
"You ready?" he breathes against the opening of her yoniverse.
She nods.
Unaware of what's to come she pants readily and he dips his head and within a single move his mouth comes into contact with her already wet center.
She moans, the feeling is foreign yet so serene she's afraid her spirit will be lifted from her body and leave.. Watching her for a reaction with lustful eyes he feasts hungrily on her...his appetite is insatible. "Please....." she whispers because she can't find another word
She has never felt anything like this in her life, her innocence far gone as she grabs his hair between her fingers and pulls, unable to fight the force that's forming in her lower belly... "Please" but she still goes unheard....so she lets go, and feels herself going in a downward spiral.... "This is what an orgasm feels like?" She thinks because she's unable to find her voice as he eats and eats, showing no mercy to her pleas.
All he knows is that, she tastes....so. fucking. good.
- Poetic Gawdess
She nods.
Unaware of what's to come she pants readily and he dips his head and within a single move his mouth comes into contact with her already wet center.
She moans, the feeling is foreign yet so serene she's afraid her spirit will be lifted from her body and leave.. Watching her for a reaction with lustful eyes he feasts hungrily on her...his appetite is insatible. "Please....." she whispers because she can't find another word
She has never felt anything like this in her life, her innocence far gone as she grabs his hair between her fingers and pulls, unable to fight the force that's forming in her lower belly... "Please" but she still goes unheard....so she lets go, and feels herself going in a downward spiral.... "This is what an orgasm feels like?" She thinks because she's unable to find her voice as he eats and eats, showing no mercy to her pleas.
All he knows is that, she tastes....so. fucking. good.
- Poetic Gawdess
Published 30th Dec 2023
Author's Note
This short short story, is from a chapter in the book I am currently writing. Obviously a delicious sex scene, shared here for your enjoyment. (;
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Title and picture as well as poem stirred up this rhyme in my mind:
Insatiable, with his lips
kissing between her opened hips,
raising from her ecstatic sighs
and tighter squeezings of her thighs.
Have you written books before? Sweet Kitty Cat 5 is a good example here on DUP.
Insatiable, with his lips
kissing between her opened hips,
raising from her ecstatic sighs
and tighter squeezings of her thighs.
Have you written books before? Sweet Kitty Cat 5 is a good example here on DUP.
2nd Jan 2024 1:26pm
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17th Jan 2024 9:27pm
A very erotic poem exposing a first experience with cunnlingus from the female side. I only hope it was your experience and not fictional.
1st Mar 2024 00:56am
