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Autumnal Vibrations
let's exfoliate
you au naturale' within the
realm of my musings
meet me midst
auburn skies and an emerald forest
and let us hibernate away
from this tempestuous climate that's
been thrust upon us
remember me
in my original stature
and i will articulate your soul with faith
using the virgin dust of
Old Terra
the love of an artist
will never be perfect but
there will always be a purity that speaks
beneath your epidermis in
hushed tones
i know you
esoterically...enigmatically
i want you to deeply vibe how
my poetic whispers air brush you in the
rightful inheritance of your
earthen hues
i innerstand the movement
of your lakes and trees
constantly in tune to the Fahrenheit
of the unspoken things
that breezes through your mind
i'm making love to you
simply through ethereal projection
beyond the scope of the day's commoners
serving my penance
viced within a cinnamon spiced
heart and soul
can you feel me earth worming
beneath your soil?
coiling in your dark dampened space?
tell me...spell it out for me
did these words penetrate far enough
or shall i dig a little deeper...?
Published 29th Dec 2023
Author's Note
repost from 2015
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29th Dec 2023 9:25pm
Great first line!
and worming…coiling..in dampened spaces.
Love the sensuality.
🙏
and worming…coiling..in dampened spaces.
Love the sensuality.
🙏
30th Dec 2023 1:21am
Just wow!
Sensual with so many great metaphors and visuals.
loved the idea of whispers being air brushed. Really stunning:)
Earth worming beneath your soil!! What?!! hahah
It's all great!
A delight to read:)
Sensual with so many great metaphors and visuals.
loved the idea of whispers being air brushed. Really stunning:)
Earth worming beneath your soil!! What?!! hahah
It's all great!
A delight to read:)
Oh the words def penetrated! You did great with this poem. Language flowed beautifully.
And you can always go deeper 😊
The image too is crazy creative. I like to think of an earth inside of us. Your writing is very inspiring.
And you can always go deeper 😊
The image too is crazy creative. I like to think of an earth inside of us. Your writing is very inspiring.
30th Dec 2023 3:54pm
30th Dec 2023 7:55pm
That last stanza…
I return to DUP only to find that once again I’ll be needing showers after I read you
I return to DUP only to find that once again I’ll be needing showers after I read you
18th Jan 2024 5:31pm
Wooooh so creatively sensual and cryptically saucy artfully , esp admire how you phrase it towards the end. Kudos!!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
