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Rounds of applause,
sounds of clapping,
fill the air.
and no, i don’t mean hands.
The way our bodies grind,
you’d think this is a new dance.
Your fingers twisted in my hair,
like you found a new home for your hands.
Your whispers kiss my skin,
as you tell me, “I’m your biggest fan.”
Longing to reach that g-spot,
you quickly change your stance.
Slowly digging into me,
I tried to hold it in, but I don’t stand a chance.
My orgasm begging for release,
while i’m clawing at the sheets,
but you don’t miss a beat.
Sweat glistening on our bodies,
unable to handle all this heat.
An aggravated huff leaving my lips
as you retreat,
flipping me over unto my back,
I guess you decided it’s time to eat.
Your lips envelop my center,
bringing me to the brink.
Tears forming in my eyes, blurring my vision
with each blink.
Your tongue fucking me, giving me no time to think.
Then you enter me once more,
your thrusts, unforgiving.
I think my soul might have left,
and levitated to the ceiling.
We both succumb to our pleasure,
that was building deep.
As you place soft kisses on my face, I drift off to sleep…
- Poetic Gawdess
sounds of clapping,
fill the air.
and no, i don’t mean hands.
The way our bodies grind,
you’d think this is a new dance.
Your fingers twisted in my hair,
like you found a new home for your hands.
Your whispers kiss my skin,
as you tell me, “I’m your biggest fan.”
Longing to reach that g-spot,
you quickly change your stance.
Slowly digging into me,
I tried to hold it in, but I don’t stand a chance.
My orgasm begging for release,
while i’m clawing at the sheets,
but you don’t miss a beat.
Sweat glistening on our bodies,
unable to handle all this heat.
An aggravated huff leaving my lips
as you retreat,
flipping me over unto my back,
I guess you decided it’s time to eat.
Your lips envelop my center,
bringing me to the brink.
Tears forming in my eyes, blurring my vision
with each blink.
Your tongue fucking me, giving me no time to think.
Then you enter me once more,
your thrusts, unforgiving.
I think my soul might have left,
and levitated to the ceiling.
We both succumb to our pleasure,
that was building deep.
As you place soft kisses on my face, I drift off to sleep…
- Poetic Gawdess
Published 27th Dec 2023
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28th Dec 2023 7:42am
A rampant scene you portray, concluding in these bliss laden verse:
Then you enter me once more,
your thrusts, unforgiving.
I think my soul might have left,
and levitated to the ceiling.
We both succumb to our pleasure,
that was building deep.
As you place soft kisses on my face, I drift off to sleep…
Then you enter me once more,
your thrusts, unforgiving.
I think my soul might have left,
and levitated to the ceiling.
We both succumb to our pleasure,
that was building deep.
As you place soft kisses on my face, I drift off to sleep…
28th Dec 2023 6:00pm
28th Dec 2023 6:06pm
I absolutely love the sense of mounting passion as you move us from a description of fingering to pussy eating and finally to copulation and insemination. And you even captured the sense of post-coital afterglow!
You have a gift for this I hope you'll never forsake! 😍
You have a gift for this I hope you'll never forsake! 😍
29th Dec 2023 2:36am
I may or may not speak for all women, when I say that we enjoy the man who takes the lead and can keep the lead as he takes us to the highest form of pleasure. I also take pleasure in writing about it. ;) Thanks for reading and for your kind works Bedtoy.
~P.G
~P.G
29th Dec 2023 8:47pm
30th Dec 2023 3:19am
Thank you for taking the time out to read, Oral. It is an honor. :)
xoxo,
~P.G
xoxo,
~P.G
31st Dec 2023 1:41am
31st Dec 2023 12:38pm
Absolutely! There is nothing better, thanks for the read Her. :)
xoxo,
~P.G
xoxo,
~P.G
8th Jan 2024 7:36pm
17th Jan 2024 9:38pm
Fucking, then eating, then fucking again
Each of them are satisfying
To bring orgasmic rain
I'm happy for you
Each of them are satisfying
To bring orgasmic rain
I'm happy for you
23rd Jan 2024 00:01am
This is hot, stimulating and a total joy to read. When erotic poetry like this is well written, there's no telling what the writer or reader can create within their mind.
