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Swear for love
My impartial thoughts, my incomplete mind
The pain is rushing, my heart is pounding
All our heavy breathing for no reason
You're taking over, you're pulling through
All the bullshit and all the pain
All the lies run through my vains
I cried your tearsI felt your pain
Baby I swear love is this way
Freefall falling in circles
FAlling in a total damnation in your heart
I'm only human, shaken at your venegence
Every step towards you is full of regret.
We swear, we scream
We throw glass, we full preject
But for what's the reason
I swear love is this way
The pain is rushing, my heart is pounding
All our heavy breathing for no reason
You're taking over, you're pulling through
All the bullshit and all the pain
All the lies run through my vains
I cried your tearsI felt your pain
Baby I swear love is this way
Freefall falling in circles
FAlling in a total damnation in your heart
I'm only human, shaken at your venegence
Every step towards you is full of regret.
We swear, we scream
We throw glass, we full preject
But for what's the reason
I swear love is this way
Published 28th Apr 2012
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5th May 2012 9:43pm
its really a shame
that we equate Love to a reason to complain
when the heart is tenderly touched
jealousy will try to deny happiness & such
but remember that Love is only a 1 way street
we Love because we want to just like when hungry we eat....
that we equate Love to a reason to complain
when the heart is tenderly touched
jealousy will try to deny happiness & such
but remember that Love is only a 1 way street
we Love because we want to just like when hungry we eat....
12th May 2012 1:42am
Love is a surrender to the heart
Nothing can tear two lovers apart
Silence and weariness has their tolls in the part
But it's just as simple as art.
Full blown missles, going clips by clips
That's the way tempers chip
Love is not a one way street
It has two parties where two lover meet
Love is a need not a want
Don't abuse it.
Nothing can tear two lovers apart
Silence and weariness has their tolls in the part
But it's just as simple as art.
Full blown missles, going clips by clips
That's the way tempers chip
Love is not a one way street
It has two parties where two lover meet
Love is a need not a want
Don't abuse it.
27th May 2012 2:01am
YOU really are what you described on your profile, lol. you are really maean,
you seen to be hard like stone,
while i read your poem, i enjoyed a blunt,
im sorry, do you think you are strong,
like silvester stalon, and play so good,
like the rollin stone, please,
be my guess and read, some of my poems,
especially the one, where i talk about
the bath stub, full of floam, plus i have
a poem calle i "sweard" but is probably the
reverse of your poem, i really like the one
you write, just made mine shine.jajajaja just joking ok,
please be my guess, i have one just like the one you wrote, i swear, please read it, let me know if you liked it.
SENA
you seen to be hard like stone,
while i read your poem, i enjoyed a blunt,
im sorry, do you think you are strong,
like silvester stalon, and play so good,
like the rollin stone, please,
be my guess and read, some of my poems,
especially the one, where i talk about
the bath stub, full of floam, plus i have
a poem calle i "sweard" but is probably the
reverse of your poem, i really like the one
you write, just made mine shine.jajajaja just joking ok,
please be my guess, i have one just like the one you wrote, i swear, please read it, let me know if you liked it.
SENA
28th May 2012 8:16pm
I live my live with the understanding that I can be independent
Love is nothing but ignorance
Hate, depression, and bitterness is what it brings
Bt if you don't open your eyes you won't see these things
Weak and blind you see these women
But no I'm not them, I'm not blinded by the semen of their men
I'm strong, no need to be vaunerable
Only repsonsible.
Idc, what you say about me lol. I'm mean yes I know. That's who I am if you don't like it then let go.
Love is nothing but ignorance
Hate, depression, and bitterness is what it brings
Bt if you don't open your eyes you won't see these things
Weak and blind you see these women
But no I'm not them, I'm not blinded by the semen of their men
I'm strong, no need to be vaunerable
Only repsonsible.
Idc, what you say about me lol. I'm mean yes I know. That's who I am if you don't like it then let go.
18th Jun 2012 4:01pm
i liked your poem but enjoyed the comments a lot. we got some gangsta poetry battle up in here. i'm for your clip so don't shoot hahaha.
20th Jun 2012 5:04am
20th Jun 2012 5:30am
@SilentMirage girl you a beast. I enjoyed your poem. You have a cold view point and you dont hide it. I like that
26th Jun 2012 7:24am
Hahah thank you. I do to hide the way I see things right or wrong. I feel as if it's my opinion then I have all the right to say to. :) but thank you.
