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ocean
you
can be
the ocean,
your fingers
grazing me,
i want
to be
the shore,
my hands
with
their skills
surround you,
hold you.
can be
the ocean,
your fingers
grazing me,
i want
to be
the shore,
my hands
with
their skills
surround you,
hold you.
Published 21st Dec 2023
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21st Dec 2023 2:51pm
Feels like shelter, this does
22nd Dec 2023 00:53am
22nd Dec 2023 1:34am
This was so damn lovely. The image of an ocean - something invincible and endless - resting safe on the chest of the steady shore is fucking breathtaking.
22nd Dec 2023 1:38am
