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Absolution
You tell me that you absolutely love
To run your fingers through, then, tug my hair;
But (finding I am eager and, above
All other qualities, so keen, aware
That my obedience will underpin
The movements of these lips), my roll of tongue
Distracts you from your thoughts, although you win
Assurance: for, together, we're the sum
Of all our parts, in a true synergy;
This is more than my hole, where you'll inject
The fluid you will jettison; once we
Have melded, in your climax, where erect
And hardened cock is always bound to dwell,
Our love is absolute, just as you'd tell...
To run your fingers through, then, tug my hair;
But (finding I am eager and, above
All other qualities, so keen, aware
That my obedience will underpin
The movements of these lips), my roll of tongue
Distracts you from your thoughts, although you win
Assurance: for, together, we're the sum
Of all our parts, in a true synergy;
This is more than my hole, where you'll inject
The fluid you will jettison; once we
Have melded, in your climax, where erect
And hardened cock is always bound to dwell,
Our love is absolute, just as you'd tell...
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Re. Absolution
16th Dec 2023 12:11pm
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Re. Absolution
16th Dec 2023 1:15pm
Cleverly written. I love the sensuality blended with a hint of tongue in cheek
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16th Dec 2023 3:40pm
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16th Dec 2023 4:50pm
I wouldn't dare to have an opinion
on their authenticity but they are
cleverly posed an phrased, for all that.
on their authenticity but they are
cleverly posed an phrased, for all that.
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Re. Absolution
16th Dec 2023 8:34pm
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Re. Absolution
20th Dec 2023 00:04am
Favorite line… there is more than my hole, where you’ll inject the fluid you will jettison
Women are so much more than that
Women are so much more than that
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Re. Absolution
29th Dec 2023 3:53pm
A really great erotic poem...causing engaging of senses...Hugs and peace, Oral
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