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Magdalena............

   
   
   
   
Magdalena, won't you lay with me  
I shall paint a portrait that you've yet to see  
Come a little closer; let me touch your mind  
Soft and sable clouds above......inside you'll find  
Pleasures there abound, if you come inside  
Warm rain falling down, baby come inside  
   
Hidden treasures there you choose to hide  
Let loose the demons that you keep inside  
I'll quench the fire burning in your soul  
Penetrate U deeply.....make you loose control  
*Darkness* all around, let me *cum* inside  
Warm rain falling down, baby come inside  
   
Feel the power of this ebony man  
Stirring your waters with    
the touch of his hand  
Spread your wings, I'll taste your love    
again and again  
The longing never ends...............  
   
I'll wrap your body up in my embrace  
Where I stand, I'm feeling no disgrace  
A subtle contrast.....as the dark turns to light  
Hold me inside your love, squeeze it with all of your might......  
Bodies locked in time, let me *cum* inside  
Sensual and so divine........  
   
won't you   
   
come    
   
inside
 
   
   
   
   
   
(Writers Note-those who know me well know that I'm a huge Peter Frampton fan and the melody/rhythm of this poem is borrowed from the song "If You Say Goodbye"  The words to the melody of that song relay a much deeper meaning.  Thanks PF and Magdalena) (-:
Written by MusicallyMrM (Mr_Mahogany_Wood)
Published | Edited 28th Apr 2012
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