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Filtered
a taste of heaven
filtered from the Mourning Star
can stain the palate
filtered from the Mourning Star
can stain the palate
Published 8th Dec 2023
| Edited 21st Dec 2023
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8th Dec 2023 8:36am
Wow.
I like this.
The dark can def leave a stain. Very creative with so little words, that's special.
I like this.
The dark can def leave a stain. Very creative with so little words, that's special.
8th Dec 2023 1:50pm
Dear N,
A little naughty is nice. I enjoyed this poem. Very clever in presentation and subject. Well done. H🌷
A little naughty is nice. I enjoyed this poem. Very clever in presentation and subject. Well done. H🌷
10th Dec 2023 2:30am
17th Dec 2023 10:19am
We must accept this pallete with its stain, thats life with its good and bad,
still on Earth wallowing, once in the Heavens, then its Eden no stain...........
still on Earth wallowing, once in the Heavens, then its Eden no stain...........
19th Dec 2023 3:33pm
Thank You Najiir my friend for you support, your beautiful soul; your soft touch.
God bless my friend.
God bless my friend.
19th Dec 2023 3:43pm
20th Dec 2023 10:52pm
I loved every part of this ... but the ambiguity of pallet messed with my head.
Palate? The taste spectrum.
Or Palette? The board artists use.
Either would be amazing and would play on the double entendre.
I LOVE the way you set up the double entendre, by the way
Pallet is a stuff is shipped on.
Your evolution kicks ass. Go you! (But change "pallet")
Palate? The taste spectrum.
Or Palette? The board artists use.
Either would be amazing and would play on the double entendre.
I LOVE the way you set up the double entendre, by the way
Pallet is a stuff is shipped on.
Your evolution kicks ass. Go you! (But change "pallet")
