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Re. To the Ends
1st Dec 2023 6:30pm
They do say fire cleanses. A brief yet succinct write.
I found it moving, thank you.
I found it moving, thank you.
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Re. To the Ends
1st Dec 2023 11:51pm
Nicely ambiguous ending, with the ambiguity between cleansing, purification and (gulp) destruction.
One question: confusing or confusion?
One question: confusing or confusion?
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Re. To the Ends
23rd Mar 2024 4:49pm
This poem captures a profound journey from a loss of faith to finding resolution through fire, which can symbolize both destruction and purification. The immediacy of the confusion emphasizes the intensity of the experience, while the mention of fire suggests a transformative process, where difficulties are faced head-on and ultimately overcome. It's a powerful exploration of inner turmoil and the potential for personal growth and renewal.
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