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Edging
Through the edging of the night
he was there
steadfast and strong
teetering at the tip of her thought
a yearning to be
allowed
to become undone
through the hallowed
the wanting
the waning
until the rise of a new lit sun
he was there
steadfast and strong
teetering at the tip of her thought
a yearning to be
allowed
to become undone
through the hallowed
the wanting
the waning
until the rise of a new lit sun
Published 24th Nov 2023
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Anonymous
24th Nov 2023 8:07pm
Beautifully sensual. A yearning quality to this poem
25th Nov 2023 1:59pm
It's been a minute since I've seen your words spread across my screen. And you don't disappoint. Strong, sensual & a bit of mystery, all wrapped in this one poem
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