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Listen To The Falling Rain

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Like piano strokes on my roof
Oh, the rain sounds like a melody !
Under crimson-tiles water proof
Reviving the olden times simplicity
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Awakened in the mid somber night
Listening to a showering Euphory
With each key, nodes come untight
Taken far away from mundane misery
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Winter gently tapping on my roof
Telling the story of the hungry wolf
When in days of fairy tale and yore
Grandma used to spin a happy folklore
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Under the warm flank of night i snug
Let the dripping points write their poesy
Let the whispering sounds form a track
'bout the happy moments of simplicity
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Each drop that falls leaves an echo
With eyes closed, sounds grow e'en more
And each drop in the dark night will outdo
The vision of the rain drops falling galore
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Written by poeticdelight

(Hamid)

Published 21st Nov 2023

Author's Note

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Re. Listen To The Falling Rain

WillowsWhimsies

21st Nov 2023 9:44pm

This reminds me of being a child in my grandparents home. They were living in grandpa's workshop while they built their house. It had a tin roof & I'd sit there by the woodstove with my eyes closed just listening to the music of rain

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poeticdelight (Hamid)

- Edited 22nd Nov 2023 9:08am

22nd Nov 2023 9:07am

Quite serenity as winter snowy night, listening to rain drops weave a sweet melody, being swaddled in thick blanket close to granny, as her lower voice drags me to a dozing state from which i build my own story.
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