deepundergroundpoetry.com
Storm
Imploring Destiny within the gated union
Sacred heart kneading the ache
Insulted dawn repent
Hurt beyond parallel forsakes me
Time will design a way
Forsaken in the hour of anxiety
my honesties blush
then bruise
Sought in the rain
hunted by ghosts
retreating elsewhere
Relief in the storm
utterly keening till I come undone
lifting my eyes heavenward
crying Eli Eli Lama Sabachthani
Published 18th Nov 2023
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 6
reading list entries 0
comments 7
reads 202
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
18th Nov 2023 8:11pm
So many beautiful images of loss and betrayal really bringing across the pain.
Meaning of the sentence: Eli Eli Lama Sabachthani
is : My God, my God, why have you forsaken me?
Meaning of the sentence: Eli Eli Lama Sabachthani
is : My God, my God, why have you forsaken me?
18th Nov 2023 8:35pm
thank you dearest poet for reading and commenting...yes that's what Jesus said while on the cross it is Aramaic 💕
18th Nov 2023 11:42pm
20th Nov 2023 8:11pm
20th Nov 2023 5:20pm
20th Nov 2023 8:12pm
thank you guys for being here I appreciate you poet as I said the trials are rising for me 💕
21st Nov 2023 9:28pm
