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Guilted
his whole intention
all along was to always bully me
with proposition after
dirty proposition
until i was positioned
right where he wanted me
pinned with no place to go
hogging up my space
with his domineering presence
selfishly sucking up my air..my thoughts
my moods..my moisture
aggressive as fuck
possessive..proactive
he saw my responses in advance
then acted on each one of them accordingly
preyed on them like a hawk
perched over my entire being
he stabbed me right through the heart
with his concentrated spirit
force fed me his intent
making sure i was thoroughly infused
as the vessel of all his desires
he had me strung out like a pinata
optimally primed for his brand of abuse
prepared to spill whatever he needed me to spill
while he thrashed into my dark space
my tears...my sweat...my spit...my cum
was all his for the taking
i could feel him colonize my hive
with each stinging injection
wanting to exist inside me..smother my organs
projecting himself in 3-D
pressing my mind..my body...my soul
he never played fair
simply because he was born a fucking Scorpio
and it was his right to do so
i made my own bed
the minute i chose to stay once he told me so
he said i had my chance to escape
i could have ran for the hills..but here i am
getting slut shamed by his cockiness
once again
it's all
my fault he constantly reminds me
so whatever he does to me
all i can do as the condemned
is arch my guilty ass for him and
just take it
Published 18th Nov 2023
Author's Note
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18th Nov 2023 5:45am
Such vivid use of simile, and I could literally FEEL each persona (the male and the female) as I was reading about them. You have the magic touch.
Thank you very much for such a compliment, dear poet.
I'm glad you enjoyed.
Thia
I'm glad you enjoyed.
Thia
18th Nov 2023 7:21am
The first verse well captions the picture. Enjoyable with its juxtapositioning of 'proposition' with 'positioned'. When one says 'proposition' you almost say "PRE-position" (ie you are mentally positioning the person towards sexual positioning).
Thank you for sharing such an insightful comment, Solomon.
Your analysis is spot on!
Thia
Your analysis is spot on!
Thia
18th Nov 2023 10:56am
I was relieved at the end to read your author’s note. It’s one thing to hand your self over to a dominant man willingly when he has your best interest at heart, quite another to be bullied and guilted. Been there, it took a long time to escape.
You DO have the magic touch. You captured the situation perfectly.
You DO have the magic touch. You captured the situation perfectly.
18th Nov 2023 4:08pm
When it comes to BDSM and things of that sort
it comes down to trust communication and experience.
Therein lies my own vetting process which can take a while.
My sexual energy is very sacred so when I choose to
share myself in this fashion, be it man or woman, I personally look for intelligence, intuition and past traumas
The last thing I need is someone who wants to use BDSM
as a form of retribution.
Thank you, my dear poetess for your concern.
I so so appreciate you and your words of wisdom
Thia.
it comes down to trust communication and experience.
Therein lies my own vetting process which can take a while.
My sexual energy is very sacred so when I choose to
share myself in this fashion, be it man or woman, I personally look for intelligence, intuition and past traumas
The last thing I need is someone who wants to use BDSM
as a form of retribution.
Thank you, my dear poetess for your concern.
I so so appreciate you and your words of wisdom
Thia.
18th Nov 2023 2:54pm
Yeah, I echo what Her said...this can be a tough place to live/escape. Good to see the spirit in the note!
Yes Willow. This this kind of bondage can become very traumatic and draining in the wrong hands but very invigorating in the hand of a compassionate lover.
Thank you so much, my dear.
Your concern and insights are deeply appreciated.
Thia
Thank you so much, my dear.
Your concern and insights are deeply appreciated.
Thia
11th Dec 2023 10:28pm
Yes this can be a serious side of life, the desire to break free but lacking the will. But there is also the side where some may love this way of living, the live in slave. The thought on being someone's release or escape, taking what ever the world throws at them and making everything better. Just a thought, tight
12th Dec 2023 2:26pm
Oh this definitely lends for serious thought, my poet.
There's a whole conversation that can be had from this comment alone
Thank you for sharing such insightful words
There's a whole conversation that can be had from this comment alone
Thank you for sharing such insightful words
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15th Apr 2024 6:16pm
holyyyy.... and I thought I wrote erotica... this just blew me to hell and back... no wait.. I'm still not back...
15th Apr 2024 6:52pm
Heyyy...thanks for stopping by and leaving your thoughts, Sam
I'm so appreciative...
I'm so appreciative...
