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Mom! Are You Nuts?
Mom! Are
you nuts? Why
are you
wearing that tiger
skinned bikini to
the beach? Why can you
not act
your true age
for once?
you nuts? Why
are you
wearing that tiger
skinned bikini to
the beach? Why can you
not act
your true age
for once?
Published 14th Nov 2023
Author's Note
This gedeyo poem is from the point of view of a young man who sees his mother wearing a certain type of summer outfit.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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23rd Nov 2023 9:41pm
Mmmm, my mind is racing to fill in what happens next. I'd like to write out what I envision the denouement, but I'm still not sure what the boundaries are on this site, even if it is merely textual.
24th Nov 2023 1:25am
