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Falling Callings
When you
are
most alone
you are:
Most loved
As I reached
for
the glory
of
the story
Where rain fell
in
falling-callings
are
most alone
you are:
Most loved
As I reached
for
the glory
of
the story
Where rain fell
in
falling-callings
Published 14th Nov 2023
Author's Note
I...
Think & feel deeply...
Pic of a location
Where I ate w my 1st love...
A sack of burgers n fries
From hot n now...
Was the perfect day...
I had some perfect days with her...
Makes me cry to think about...
Strange...
Think & feel deeply...
Pic of a location
Where I ate w my 1st love...
A sack of burgers n fries
From hot n now...
Was the perfect day...
I had some perfect days with her...
Makes me cry to think about...
Strange...
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The author encourages honest critique.
Mate, I like the poem. it made me feel what I feel, which is very different to what you felt when you wrote it. I just don’t think it needs an author’s note. you don’t need to explain yourself; the poem either says enough, or it doesn’t. I think it does.
16th Nov 2023 12:32pm
Thank you Mate...
I disagree on this point...
:)
(I use random photographs for poems...
Capturing the energetic construct...
In this instance, the pic did not go with the poem...
I mean, I wrote the poem separate, so I was
just reflecting on the pic...
Which of a different energetic construct...
Then...
I used the energetic wave form toward
another project I am working on...
As well as personal evolution and empowerment...
Exploring the unconscious...
To push the art...
One write leads to the next...
Tis the creative process...
I disagree on this point...
:)
(I use random photographs for poems...
Capturing the energetic construct...
In this instance, the pic did not go with the poem...
I mean, I wrote the poem separate, so I was
just reflecting on the pic...
Which of a different energetic construct...
Then...
I used the energetic wave form toward
another project I am working on...
As well as personal evolution and empowerment...
Exploring the unconscious...
To push the art...
One write leads to the next...
Tis the creative process...
16th Nov 2023 11:09pm
