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Subdue
I will have time
inside your mind
a centre stage
you in the light
close your eyes,
feel unrestrained
when i become
most unkind
i will have time
inside your mind
a centre stage
you in the light
open your eyes,
you are adrift
with my teeth
in your skin
I will have time
inside your mind
a centre stage
you in the light
close your eyes,
open your eyes
you are tied
to be untied.
Published 10th Nov 2023
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10th Nov 2023 5:22am
Dear N,
Wonderfully hypnotic. I like how you move the reader along with these suggestions while maintaining control of subject and meter. Great write. H🌷
Wonderfully hypnotic. I like how you move the reader along with these suggestions while maintaining control of subject and meter. Great write. H🌷
22nd Dec 2023 4:10am
