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novel...
A wonderful
and
an infatuated
novel
which has
never been read
which has
only been caressed
which has
not been carved
which is
real white
which is
ready to give delight
which is
smooth like glass
which is
hot like flask
which is
full of mystery
and magic....
and
an infatuated
novel
which has
never been read
which has
only been caressed
which has
not been carved
which is
real white
which is
ready to give delight
which is
smooth like glass
which is
hot like flask
which is
full of mystery
and magic....
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Re. novel...
7th Nov 2023 8:06pm
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8th Nov 2023 2:24am
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8th Nov 2023 3:04am
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8th Nov 2023 10:37am
Hoi hoi
I’ve read the book, but I’ll be back tomorrow to read it again.
Thank you.
Kind regards, Gus
I’ve read the book, but I’ll be back tomorrow to read it again.
Thank you.
Kind regards, Gus
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Re. novel...
9th Nov 2023 2:26am
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9th Nov 2023 2:31am
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9th Nov 2023 2:45am
मौक़ा दे कर देखो, मुझे शब्दों को पिरोना आता है, बंद किताबों को भी खोलना आता है, जो न लिखा हो उसे भी लिख देना आता है ❤️
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9th Nov 2023 8:03am
कुछ चालाकियाँ करना मुझे भी आता है
पहेलियाँ बुझाना भी थोड़ा कुछ आता है
निमंत्रण देंगे तुम्हें सवेरे को
रात तक मुझे रिझाना तुम्हें आता है क्या?
पहेलियाँ बुझाना भी थोड़ा कुछ आता है
निमंत्रण देंगे तुम्हें सवेरे को
रात तक मुझे रिझाना तुम्हें आता है क्या?
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9th Nov 2023 4:29pm
दे कर देखिए हम निराश नहीं करेगें
तुम्हारी पीठ पर कुछ अल्फ़ाज़ लिख जायेगें
डोर से बंधी है जो लिबास वो फर्श पर बिखर जायेगें
रोशन हो जाएगा जिस्म जब चाँद छुएगा
भीग जाएगा बदन जब उंगलियां रेंगेगी
चादरों की सिलवट, साँसों में सिसकी
होठों पर आह, और आह में मेरा नाम
सब होगा, जब हम साथ होगें
तुम्हारी पीठ पर कुछ अल्फ़ाज़ लिख जायेगें
डोर से बंधी है जो लिबास वो फर्श पर बिखर जायेगें
रोशन हो जाएगा जिस्म जब चाँद छुएगा
भीग जाएगा बदन जब उंगलियां रेंगेगी
चादरों की सिलवट, साँसों में सिसकी
होठों पर आह, और आह में मेरा नाम
सब होगा, जब हम साथ होगें
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Re. novel...
An inviting erotic poem with picture that raises the element of sexual mystery remaining to be uncovered (especially poignant as her nightie is white - by tradition the colour of virginity, as on a bride on wedding night.) The painting and poem raised this rhyming summary in my mind
Woman on the bed
a book to be read....
Woman on the bed
a book to be read....
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Re: Re. novel...
14th Apr 2024 5:54pm
I wrote this poem after seeing the picture... Well I'm glad that you read my old poetry... It's pleasure...
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14th Apr 2024 6:05pm
Your poetry gives pleasure - you seem to know how to hit the readers' spot. I myself have written a good few poems inspired by pictures I have seen.
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14th Apr 2024 6:17pm