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On Samhain --

The Absence of His Presence

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Upon the autumn twilight o'er the fen
along the silent pond in grave repose
resound the scolds of each keen winter wren
while purple-loosestrifes frostbit waste in woes --
as yet a gaze enframed by pearl-laced snow
within a silver pool of brittle glass
reveals a cailín essences ago
ere forty springtides lone brief came to pass --
and round the eyes slow withered noonlit skin,
the damask of the cheek soft fading died,
a grimace fixed and wry cold-blooded grin
the golden time and brilliant hard belied --
before this aged bone hook long reached to grasp
in muddied death no ghost there be to clasp.

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Contest: The Cauldron of Winter

Sponsor: Anne-Ri999

Form: English Sonnet on the Loss of Love

Major Poetic Technique: Visitation of Irony

Theme: Reality Unspiritual
Written by Jordan (D.O.C.)
Published
Author's Note
Brain, Reason, Facts, Truths, Wisdom, Ethics, and
Death's Finality
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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