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at the end of night
Over my eyes
his pink smooth sky
deep blue desires,
an evening's transparent twilight
a shining star mesmerized
crescent moon left
it's grey edges aside
clinging to the reddish
moonlight
candles were lit
limbs were loosened
just enjoyed..
his pink smooth sky
deep blue desires,
an evening's transparent twilight
a shining star mesmerized
crescent moon left
it's grey edges aside
clinging to the reddish
moonlight
candles were lit
limbs were loosened
just enjoyed..
Published 29th Oct 2023
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29th Oct 2023 4:46am
Dear D,
Lovely gentle piece that lets the reader glued along a silky celestial sky kind of love. Terrific piece. H🌷
Lovely gentle piece that lets the reader glued along a silky celestial sky kind of love. Terrific piece. H🌷
29th Oct 2023 6:59am
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29th Oct 2023 8:29am
You made sweet sweet love while watching the moonlight. Keep on writing you.
29th Oct 2023 1:10pm
29th Oct 2023 4:21pm
"Limbs were loosened" what a great line. Perfect.
I like when colors play a significant role in a write. They aid the mood well. Your descriptive ability here does that for the reader. This is like something best read with wine. Sophisticated.
A wonderful result, Dimpy .
I like when colors play a significant role in a write. They aid the mood well. Your descriptive ability here does that for the reader. This is like something best read with wine. Sophisticated.
A wonderful result, Dimpy .
29th Oct 2023 4:53pm
Anonymous
29th Oct 2023 6:34pm
Night sky is the perfect backdrop for sensuality. Beautiful
30th Oct 2023 2:18am
30th Oct 2023 12:39pm
ah,...the essence of an evening
thank you for sharing your observations...
your perspective.
thank you for sharing your observations...
your perspective.
30th Oct 2023 12:48pm
