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AU NATUREL (ON NUDE BEACH)
Au naturel,,
we merge so well
'midst the bodies
on these beaches.
in this Eden
there in Sweden..
No swimming trunks
upon the hunks
nor bikinis
on the lassies
obscure the view
of the form nue,
As some move free
in/out the sea.,
others older,
long-time bolder
sunbathe content
by a half-tent.
we merge so well
'midst the bodies
on these beaches.
in this Eden
there in Sweden..
No swimming trunks
upon the hunks
nor bikinis
on the lassies
obscure the view
of the form nue,
As some move free
in/out the sea.,
others older,
long-time bolder
sunbathe content
by a half-tent.
Published 26th Oct 2023
Author's Note
The French phrase was the poetry prompt. Another musing on nude beaches. (For rhyme sake I have set in in a country I have not been to.)
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Anonymous
26th Oct 2023 7:16am
This is some fantastic writing!!
Very vivid and authentic!!
Very vivid and authentic!!
26th Oct 2023 1:21pm
To an extent it was based on my experiences of such a beach in Wales, not Sweden.
26th Oct 2023 2:50pm
