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Drowned
I only saw blue as the water pushed against me
Despair chased me as I struggled to break free
My lungs began to ache
and I think my eyes watered
I woke up with a start
trying to catch my breath
Despair chased me as I struggled to break free
My lungs began to ache
and I think my eyes watered
I woke up with a start
trying to catch my breath
Published 18th Oct 2023
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18th Oct 2023 10:37pm
I have awoke choking, like gasping for air but not from like a drowning dream.
Good description.
Good description.
26th Oct 2023 12:55pm
your poem is so captivating and unique. your choice of words is perfect. I can't wait for your next poem!
