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mosaic
artfully placed,
this land
of
broken pieces
stretches away,
rolling out,
deep
seeded grounds,
the calmness
surveying
over
the landscape,
these moments
seen
as wonderful
paintings
i want to
confiscate
each
and
keep them
in
my possession.
this land
of
broken pieces
stretches away,
rolling out,
deep
seeded grounds,
the calmness
surveying
over
the landscape,
these moments
seen
as wonderful
paintings
i want to
confiscate
each
and
keep them
in
my possession.
Published 16th Oct 2023
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16th Oct 2023 8:57am
Great poem. That word confiscate reminds of my dad when I was a kid. Lol
I love " this land of broken pieces"
I love " this land of broken pieces"
16th Oct 2023 9:06am
16th Oct 2023 9:14am
Any memory of my dad is a fond one. I guess I always had something I wasn't supposed to have, lol
17th Oct 2023 5:00am
I adore nature poems. This was great. I could picture this, nicely done. <3
17th Oct 2023 5:30am
Anonymous
17th Oct 2023 7:13am
Nature is the ultimate romantic, isn't it?
Great write.
Great write.
17th Oct 2023 10:06am
