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Offering to a Raven
We throw the dead mice
out the back door,
that were caught in a trap
the night before.
A raven flies by
and snatches them up,
an offering to him
we're so glad he cleans up.
A delicious little morsel
that keeps him satisfied,
so many more to come
we’re all too happy to provide.
Published 9th Oct 2023
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You make simple things grow big and perceptible ..they take the first role in your story, something like Educative legends, or learning thru short stories;.
its so good. stay safe ..and happy.
its so good. stay safe ..and happy.
9th Oct 2023 7:45pm
Thank you so much, poeticdelight! Your comments are always so wonderful and helpful. I really appreciate it. A safe and happy day to you too!
